Her form is actually quite good, at least for being a beginner. Some of the things he's saying she's already used to. Balance. Not overextending. But that's not to say that there aren't things to correct, her being from Lobo's school of
'kill yer enemy any way ya can, preferably in some painful an' bloody way an' don't fuss too much about the fraggin' details'
and all.
This strikes Jelani as peaceful. Compliments she doesn't need, and insults she's used to. That Connor stays neutral, and that his instructions are clear and a matter of fact helps the young halfbreed disconnect from the world around them. Right now she's acutely aware and focused on her own body, and on Connor's instructions. Had she stopped and think, she might have found that she needs this.
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Date: 2010-09-15 07:14 am (UTC)This strikes Jelani as peaceful. Compliments she doesn't need, and insults she's used to. That Connor stays neutral, and that his instructions are clear and a matter of fact helps the young halfbreed disconnect from the world around them. Right now she's acutely aware and focused on her own body, and on Connor's instructions. Had she stopped and think, she might have found that she needs this.